Category: My Book Excerpts
March 30th, 2008
Response To Critique Of My 1st Chapter
Written by: Adele Treskillard
Published on March 30th, 2008 @ 08:32:41 pm , using 448 words, 355 views
Published on March 30th, 2008 @ 08:32:41 pm , using 448 words, 355 views
Deanna said:
I've only read your first chapter so far, and it was enjoyable after the first few pages. The dialogue was a little hard to follow and the modern colloquialisms confused the medievalish style. Other than that, though, I really liked it an… more »



